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Hypocrite's Nightmare by ~BrokenBabe15:iconBrokenBabe15:





You said we could tell each other everything.

You said you trusted me, and I trusted you.
But just like me, you had secrets, too.
You had a problem, yet you wouldn't tell.
Then after you were gone, they all said you'd went to Hell.

Your friends found out the hard way.
And you had many chances to tell me, but you'd never say.
One fatal secret was to lie there in your head.
Lie there at least, until the day she found you dead.
If you would have told me or even one of them, you'd still be alive.
But since you didn't I blame myself, and for this, I feel I can't survive.

You said we could tell each other everything...
©2005-2009 ~BrokenBabe15
:iconbrokenbabe15:

Author's Comments

This is a poem I wrote about my mom's death. Um..enjoy...

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:iconbutterballsxe:
Trust... Hard thing to come by.
:iconbrokenbabe15:
Is that a positive or negative feedback? (slow today..but hyper... = not thinking 2 hard...lol)

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People always say that men are like wine; they get better with age. Well, what the fuck do we get??? A bunch of Botox offers in our junk mail?
-Tila Tequila
:iconbrokenbabe15:
ok. thanks.

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People always say that men are like wine; they get better with age. Well, what the fuck do we get??? A bunch of Botox offers in our junk mail?
-Tila Tequila
:iconskinnylittleschizo:
I'm sorry about your mom:( you did a good job on this though.

You said you trusted me, and I trusted you.
But just like me, you had secrets, too.


my favourite lines:)

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:weed: MyStock+Photography:weed:

:dygel: :blackice: "We can't stop here, This is bat country!"
:liquify: :nieman:
:iconbrokenbabe15:
thnx 4 ur sympathy and thnx 4 liking the poem :)

and i added u 2 my friends list.. maybe u could add me?

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People always say that men are like wine; they get better with age. Well, what the fuck do we get??? A bunch of Botox offers in our junk mail?
-Tila Tequila
:iconskinnylittleschizo:
you're welcome, and sure I'll add you:)

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:weed: MyStock+Photography:weed:

:dygel: :blackice: "We can't stop here, This is bat country!"
:liquify: :nieman:
:iconbrokenbabe15:
aww! thanks!!!!!!!!!

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People always say that men are like wine; they get better with age. Well, what the fuck do we get??? A bunch of Botox offers in our junk mail?
-Tila Tequila
:iconblack-gothika:
I think I'm going to cry. (In a sensitive mood today) I really love this!

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Home of the most miserable guide ever.
:iconbrokenbabe15:
Aww... thank you. The fave is much appreciated. :) :hug:

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People always say that men are like wine; they get better with age. Well, what the fuck do we get??? A bunch of Botox offers in our junk mail?
-Tila Tequila

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